Stoned Love

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    Stoned Love

     Stoned Love

    Broken down and feeling strangled, in this world I am entangled

    With my heart and feelings mangled, pray you save me........

    When I return and asemble my pride and begin to pick up stride 

    You come around to steal inside, won’t you entreat me…..

    If love is truly genuine and my love, should we arise again,

    Marking your name upon my heart, will you desire me………

    If our love becomes as stone and your love you have not shone,

    Can you release me…..


    -M. Jacobs

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    wamomo commented on Stoned Love

    12-26-2009

    This is a beautiful powerful, yet tender message in prose. I can almost feel the tormented heartache with which this piece overflowed from your heart...the truths in this are stark and deep..thank you for sharing such a personal write... : )
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    danmartyjake1

    12/28/2009

    Thanks for your perceptive comments. I appreciate your sincerity and understanding.

    whiteoleander commented on Stoned Love

    12-14-2009

    i agree with jade that this is perfection of words. Your message was delivered strong and with passion of a raw mind
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    danmartyjake1

    12/16/2009

    Thanks for this kind compliment to this prose. It has a special personal meaning to me.

    HarverTomsson commented on Stoned Love

    12-03-2009

    "Love me or free me," those on again off again clingers who can't give but only take really suck the life out of a person, married or not. Only a tender soul still asks, not demands...
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    danmartyjake1

    12/16/2009

    For sure, Love can only flourish when it is free to expand and express and feel confident only with assurance that the love will remain, as well. Thanks for your comment.

    jademelissa74 commented on Stoned Love

    11-24-2009

    What a powerful message! For if the love has evaporated, the print upon the glass will show...A well-articulated piece. Great job!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    Yes you got it. Thanks for expressing that.

    knight4696 commented on Stoned Love

    10-18-2009

    You certainly have a way with words - you convey so much in a short and beautiful poem. Nice work!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    Stoned Love was written very quickly, as many of mine are and I felt a compulsion when writing it. Thanks for reading it and for your thoughtful perspective.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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