Honesty

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    Honesty
    Honesty

     

    Don’t always believe what you read in the paper

    ‘ Cause truth be known, he did not rape her

     

    A terrible, unjust sentence he was handed

    And then was his family name also branded

     

    He wanted be the best coach and teacher

    That was the way that he would meet her

     

    Because of her age and her femininity

    They listened to her lies and devised a remedy

     

    Unforced was his response, I did not do it

    You must believe, I’m no meager fool

     

    At last to his judgement he was taken

    Even though they were all quite mistaken

     

    After all, what’s done is done

    Since the fight had to be won

     

    Worthy of justice, he was not to be

    For man cannot be saved by honesty

     

    -M. Jacobs

     

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    zaphnathpaaneah commented on Honesty

    12-12-2009

    Matthew 10:26 “But don’t be afraid of those who threaten you. For the time is coming when everything that is covered will be revealed, and all that is secret will be made known to all.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/12/2009

    Yes, I am aware of this verse and it's meaning for us now. I am only sad for so many suffer in the waiting of the revealing.Thanks for your patient and supportive heart.

    Rhymer commented on Honesty

    12-09-2009

    Lies of this nature have ruined many an innocents lives, on the other hand many a minor's lives have been shattered by an adult not being the adult and saying know. Finding the truth can sometimes be like finding the exit in a maze. Enjoyed this excellent write.
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    Rhymer

    12/09/2009

    I hate it when I forget to proofread (know) should have been (no)

    danmartyjake1

    12/09/2009

    This is so true, Rhymer, it's hard to distinguish the truth most of the time. Thanks for reading and your comments.

    FranzJ commented on Honesty

    12-08-2009

    I have a nepheew who is under house arrest for time already served because of others lies - i van feel your pain in your poem - nice
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    danmartyjake1

    12/08/2009

    Not every one is always guilty, I am certainly not excusing those who are guilty. Thanks for your understanding, reading my poem and commenting.

    coacher commented on Honesty

    12-08-2009

    Well written poem. I have a friend that was only 17 and he carries the stigma of an affair with a 15 year old girl. He will be on the sex offender list for the rest of his life. The girl was 15 going on 21 if you get my meaning. Great story about lies and deception.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/08/2009

    Truly this happens all of the time to innocent people. It's just not knowing who you can trust, basically and it's heartbreaking what it does to families and other; lives. Thanks for your understanding and reading my poetry and commenting.

    GinasDiamond commented on Honesty

    12-07-2009

    Oh my God! You are Great! It could not of been put in better words by any one else. It is such a Tragedy when someone's Life is taken away Due to a Lie. God Bless This Man and His Family! And May God Save this Persons soul That would Let the devil corrupt their mind! I will Be on my Knees saying an extra prayer For Them all!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/08/2009

    Believe me I feel the same as you described watching this happen next door to me. It's heartbreaking and I know he didn't do it. What comes around goes around they say. God will rectify it I am sure. Thanks for your comments.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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