Hearth

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    Hearth
    Hearth

    Familiar, soothing and sound
    Stone, anchored to the ground

    Pillars, marble, statues lure
    Gateways, altars, steadfast, sure

    Common, custom, driven down
    Solemn, sober, subtle mound

    Timeless, ageless, eternal dwell
    Daunting lock and freeing cell

    Open chamber dive in dust
    Raging anger, living lust

    -MJacobs

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    bklynrizz commented on Hearth

    01-07-2010

    To mind came the first house we owned that had a fire place in it. Some wine, Andrea Boccelli on the stereo, and a fire. Great poem. Thanks for the memory.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/07/2010

    Pleased you had a beautiful moment with "Hearth".

    Marsink commented on Hearth

    12-21-2009

    Very intriguing write: a hearth without fire, heat, smoke or light. I am confident, I would have surely failed to entertain this write without these essentials, that outwardly signify a hearth. Excellent write!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/28/2009

    So glad you read it and enjoyed it. It signifies something deeper than a fire place. But you got the gist of it.

    Paolo commented on Hearth

    12-20-2009

    Many years ago I rented a small, old cottage in the mountains that I might rest and recharge after obtaining my graduate degree. The cottage is high in the Piedmonts and much to my surprise the first night I was there snow fell about a half meter deep. I found wood had been cut and so I built a fire not in the stove (it was oil burning) but in the very old, solid and quiet fire place. I spent the evening eating from the pot where flames caressed it's blackness and later feeling full, I lay looking into the fire and taking in the whole of the fire and the vessel that contained it. I did not put words to it but after reading this work I do not have to as you have helped me to know now what my eyes knew so long ago. For any who have shared a fire with someone or even alone, this poem will certainly help one to know there is more to hearth and stone.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/20/2009

    Thanks Paolo, for getting over to this older one of mine. I really loved it as I wrote it and it means something different to everyone that reads it, most assuredly. I am thankful for your perspective and I am glad we had a similar glimpse of the Hearth. I grew up in S. Ga and we had many hearths in all of my childhood homes, as well as fire spits for roasting pheasant and other game. Hearths and Fires were abundant all throughout my childhood, so that is probably why it is so prevalent for me. ty

    knight4696 commented on Hearth

    11-23-2009

    Love the imagery and flow of this one!!! They are both superb as well as the rhyming. Outstanding!!! ..... Ken
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    TY, to you for checking out so many of mine and your generous and kind words to me.

    ginga commented on Hearth

    06-09-2009

    powerful, eerie, and tremendous use of adjectives being listed in your lines. The short length lends to the message's power. Great write. ginga
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    danmartyjake1

    07/01/2009

    Thank you so much.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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