©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

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    I am a rat, no not a snitch but in astrology, people in life treat me as vermin but I am great in my numbers and my positives are many.

    ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    I am the rat
    you could say
    yes I am that
    in walls I play.

    I come out at night
    eating food from the floor
    lessening your labored plight
    a few nibbles no more.

    a diseased flea
    parasite on my fur
    and you blame me
    for the plauges they stir.

    so many things I do cure
    so numerous my uses are
    I care for our old for sure
    and my sick are never barred.

    The "crumbs" I take are but little
    compared to all you waste
    I get jobs done no dittling
    our numbers great we work in haste.

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    mathiasthom commented on ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    04-13-2010

    I have no idea what the heck my astrological animal is(well, Cancer, so I smother, cling,retreat,lol) This was a fun read. I'll have to read some more of your poetry.
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    Charlie23 commented on ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    04-12-2010

    OK, this is very funny to me. Loved the poem! I decided I'd likely be a cat, and looked up the 12 cats of zodiac. The hip cat, fit me to a t. thanks for the laugh.
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    WordSlinger commented on ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    04-05-2010

    This is cool, I know some one loves them , as pets, lol, ty WS
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    Ecdysis commented on ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    03-25-2010

    I enjoyed this poem, and i like the different subject matter... good job...
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    Insideme commented on ©2010 I am a Rat (What are you?)

    03-25-2010

    No matter how society see's and depicts our astrological animals , there is always a postitive side to any negative they offer. All beings are sacred.
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    Tempy

    03/25/2010

    that is true but when one takeths away they often give it again some day.... to someone... and the world spins on

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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