©2010 Stay Baby Stay

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    written listening to M83 -We Own the Sky and thinking about my guy.

    ©2010 Stay Baby Stay

     Stay baby stay
    "I know" you gotta go
    its just you have this way
    that makes me lose control.

    I pull you back down
    to sit on my lap
    I mean to astound
    feel my heartbeat on your back.

    Youre lookin so sexy
    in that mechanic uniform
    I just wanna flex
    c'mon lets ride this storm....in you I am reborn.

    My blood meeting yours
    below the surface of our skins
    ebb and flow on a full moon's shores
    our essencse evanesent and dancing on the winds.


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    ginga commented on ©2010 Stay Baby Stay

    04-27-2010

    insideme, I love the care feee and flirtatious style of this poem of yearning. ginga
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    dahlusion commented on ©2010 Stay Baby Stay

    04-19-2010

    "My blood meeting yours below the surface of our skins" — the erotic charge in this line is a direct hit to my soul. Bravo!!
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    Tempy commented on ©2010 Stay Baby Stay

    04-17-2010

    that mechanic uniform I just wanna flex c'mon lets hehehe :) ..I certainly think this was great, i love those lines, I do like a man in uniform, or shirt and tie swarve doesn't feel too bad either... Great write
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    SuSpence commented on ©2010 Stay Baby Stay

    04-17-2010

    Beautiful poem and very romantic, I have never read you before but I am now very glad I stumbled upon you :) I loved the content especially but this is also a beautifully crafted technichal poem, you are talented.
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