©2010 Doubt (The enemy of self)

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    In my solitary life I feel alone and search myself, sometimes I find doubt in every corner of my mind and have to let it out. I question everything and this Is what pulled out of me today. I dont know if my feelings are true intuition or self doubt. Im hoping for the latter. In the end of my reflection Ive come to one conclusion, no matter how it is on his side, On my side, I love him so so much.

    ©2010 Doubt (The enemy of self)

    Has it fallen dead?
    was it ever alive?
    this lust for love
    on which I thrive?

    Did I make it out
    to be more than it was?
    did I do something wrong
    or lose you just because?

    I want to come with you
    but youre already there
    I dont know what to do
    push it further, do you care?

    I miss the feeling that you need me too
    everything seems to have gone awry
    your spirit always the deepest of blue
    is my love for you unrequited?

    In between, like purgatory
    this middle place that I dwell
    afraid to unfold this story
    will I get lost in the details?

    I dont know why I doubt as I do
    I wish I didnt think that way
    should I walk a mile in your shoes
    shall I then feel youre here to stay?


                                             
    ©2010

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