Nothing Inside (song)

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Nothing Inside (song)

You look into the mirror,
See eyes if error.
Your tear-streaked face turns red as glass shatters,
You fall to the floor completely battered.
Motionless on the floor remember all in your mind,
Broken on the inside.
Drips from the outside rain,
Eyes closed in emotional pain.
You break the dead pace,
Punched in the face.
The cruel laughing and teasing,
Punished to make the pleasing.
Drip, drip, drip, covered to the chin,
Breathing hard you count to ten.

(Chorus)

Everyday you cry,
You wish you would just die.
You're so alone,
You wish you could've known.
You're all numb inside,
With all the fear to hide.
The steady drips outside your only friend,
There's nothing to mend.

(End Chorus)

Only you can choose to live or drown,
You sigh and then you frown.
What a bad life you have seen,
Everyone is so mean.
You let yourself go,
Then you start to sink down low.

(Chorus)

As you die in the water,
You ooze tears even hotter.
Fading away from this world with loud roaring,
No one wishes to touch you and say sorry.

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immortal commented on Nothing Inside (song)

07-05-2009

i give it a ten... its message is clearly defined, its relateable and i just thinks it was put together very well in general.

Rhaven

07/05/2009

Thank you!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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