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    The soft glow of light shows the thin streaks,
    Bowed head, chest vacant because of the nonsensical technique.
    A tenebrosity heap covers the beige carpet already rotten,
    As it lays there footsteps track already forgotten.
    Gaze into the windows of the soul and see the abuse,
    It's something that can't be obliterated just let it darken and bruise.
    The lament is innermost and silent,
    This disarray compares to being violent.
    Slash the malaise and watch it exude,
    Digest melancholy clouded feelings that seclude.
    Forsake the stone forth there is known,
    The cycle there is shown.
    Terminate all that were ever so gently once faded,
    Stare at all of them because it was what I, myself, have created.

    Friday, June 09 2006

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    Crush commented on Crumble

    06-24-2011

    i don't think i ever told you that i put this in my favourites. i love it.

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Crumble

    10-15-2010

    oh wow, I can't believe that the other comment you got gave you a 5........how shitty is that......well darling you got a 10 from me........

    Rhaven

    10/15/2010

    Thanks, I wrote that after I broke up with my first boyfriend. It's how I felt.

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Crumble

    10-15-2010

    wow that was very deep, a very interesting write dear. leaves one with a lot to contemplate......wonderful job......love asha

    Tray4 commented on Crumble

    06-01-2009

    Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam that was daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam Deep.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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