Adam's Song

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Adam's Song

I sit here and I write,
to you as I try not to give into the night.
I want you back, I need you back,
You placed your fingers in my veins and I was your hijack.
People think I'm insane but you're all I want,
I only have the ghost of you and in me how you haunt.
Have I gone mad?
But you are all I had.
I can hear your voice in my head,
And it opens up the wounds that my heart has bled.
Can't you hear me calling?
Are you talking back or that just a memory that I am just recalling?
I'm sitting here with the moon around me it's light pools,
Echoing off the walls you are not there and I'm a fool.

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Tray4 commented on Adam's Song

01-29-2011

Wow it's disturbing But a great poem at the same time. Great job! my woman:)

ApaqRasgirl commented on Adam's Song

01-19-2011

wonderful read dear so filled with true emotions from your heart and the spirit of a true poet.......it is so sad to lose someone you love and wish and hope that they will come back....but you told it so well in such sweet words......wonderful job.....love asha

Artie commented on Adam's Song

01-14-2011

Very strong write! It's difficult to put the feelings you describe into words, but you pull it off with ease - 10 from me

dahlusion commented on Adam's Song

01-12-2011

This is simply beautiful poetic pain: "You placed your fingers in my veins and I was your hijack"— and sexy too! My entire screen turned blue after reading this one. Good Job! Bravo!!!!!!!

Arcangelrebirth commented on Adam's Song

01-12-2011

amazingly powerful piece as is with all your work, you take me right there as if i was in the same situation :) your work is filled with such emotion and you really make me feel for you you are such a talent nicole, dont stop releasing pieces like this they are a pleassure to read :)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Rhaven’s Poems (29)

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Title Comments
Like Me 2
Adam's Song 8
Many a Fool 3
Depths of Fire 8
Cut too deep 8
All I Begun 2
Reverie 3
Shadows of Life 1
Forgetting 3
Nothing Inside (song) 1
Hate 4
Down Fall 2
What Remains 0
Bullet Proof 0
Memories 1
Rainbow of Tears 3
Flower In The Meadow 1
No Hourglass 0
Lights 0
Winter Moon 2
Crutches 0
Frozen Fantasy 0
Ambiguities 1
Betrayed 0
Crumble 4
Denial 0
In Depths 1
Broken Mirror 1
Tormented 0