All I Begun

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    All I Begun
    So cut me or not, it all feels the same.
    There's no air to breathe.
    I never felt so hollow filled with a soul,
    When my heart has been burned to the bottom.
    When I speak my words come out as dust,
    Which leave me unfaithfully silent lost within my mind.
    Memories are like pieces of glass scraping across my brain.
    Making them ooze out unwantingly.
    I look and crack,
    I'm a map that leads nowhere.
    I want to kill all of the light that we begun.
    Even my own.

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    Crush commented on All I Begun

    10-14-2010

    i am huge fan of yours and like all of your other poems, i am in love with this one as well. such a monstrous and immense talent all yours. i am glad you post and inspire. super 10
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    Rhaven

    10/15/2010

    Thank you. It's been a while since I wrote anything... I should start again soon...

    Zep commented on All I Begun

    01-31-2010

    Well written, nice wording. Enjoyable read, for sure! You're very talented/gifted writer/poet. I enjoy reading your work. I can relate to this piece. It's like hanging onto the last thread, which is also wearing thin. Am I close to the meaning? I hope so! Perhaps I read to much into poetry. But this touches me this way. See ya, Ivy
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    Rhaven

    01/31/2010

    Yeah, you're on the right track. It does mean that. It means I started something, it ended up being horrible but still holding on anyway.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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