Forgetting

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    Forgetting

     In this cage I feel isolated,
    I wither at the bottom I don't wanna be alienated.

    In a room full of silence all I can hear is the screaming,
    Reflecting in my memories forever seeking.

    Letting go of all those years taken for granted,
    I've changed, you've haven't, all those lies you planted.

    The ones you told my tears,
    Only to release my fears.

    You sold me out to save yourself forgetting all of the why,
    You gave out all of the secrets of you and I.

    I have no time to listen to all of your shame,
    You left with no words you're all the same.

    I don't want to be that girl that I looked and saw in the mirror,
    Folding her minds enemies in her eyes choking on error.

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    Zep commented on Forgetting

    01-30-2010

    Nicely written. Love the rhyme scheme. And it all makes perfect sense too. Thanks for sharing. Zep
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    warsaw commented on Forgetting

    08-23-2009

    WOW !! your a deep and passionate writter and it's wonderful to be able to read such work thank you for sharing sincerely WARSAW
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    Smurf1 commented on Forgetting

    07-22-2009

    I was lost on the last sentence, 'Folding her minds enemies in her eyes choking on error. ' What does that mean? No dissrespect, you are a terrific writter but, you must be able to clarify your expressions clearly so others may grasp the true definition of what your trying to say, if your readers have to guess what your trying to say you lose audience.
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    Rhaven

    07/24/2009

    I don't really care if people read or not. I like when people don't get what I say. If that makes me out to be a jerk, so be it.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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