Like Me

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  • Lost Love

    Like Me

     I gave you all of me,
    But in you was nothing but deceive.
    You left without saying goodbye,
    And, oh, how I cried.
    It tore me down,
    I was to my emotions bound.
    I slowly put myself back together once out of my heart,
    Came the dart.
    You never fully had me fooled,
    Your misery around you pooled.
    In a day not so far from here you will wish you shared,
    All of the feelings that said you cared.
    Someday you'll understand when it's you,
    When the tears fall down your face like mine do.

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    Zep commented on Like Me

    02-28-2011

    Really nice visual poem. Captures and captivates, nice easy flow. Great poem, Thanks for sharing :D
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    freespirit69 commented on Like Me

    02-22-2011

    Wonderful. This one spoke to me. Thank you for sharing.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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