Mellow Pain

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    Mellow Pain

    A car crashed just outside

    Leaving a wreck and a corpse

    All the while I sat on my balcony

    Taking the sunset in

    Mimicking human nature

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    erroneousflint commented on Mellow Pain

    09-21-2010

    """"Mimicking human nature""""" Watch it son, mimicking human nature can somehow put you in the percentile of fault....However, I can see you have what it takes to deal....A 10 straight -up from this poor bad dreamer...
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    Tyme commented on Mellow Pain

    09-20-2010

    Yeah. It's like, " Woah! What was that? D'anybody get hurt? Man, glad it's not me. Now, where were we?" We are an apathetic bunch huh?
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    ginga commented on Mellow Pain

    09-18-2010

    I want to say "shit happens" but the tragic events of life do occur every single second as onlookers remain intact. Creative thought. ginga
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    rsalassi commented on Mellow Pain

    09-18-2010

    How often we read poems penned by "poets of blood" from the other person's viewpont..vivid accounts of tissue scattered, bones snapping, blood flowing, life ebbing, etc. all the while as an indifferent teenager languishes on his balcony above, concerned only with his suntan. Excellent poem, Stig, (and I commend you for not incluing a list.)
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    stigbohnolsen

    09/21/2010

    I'm glad you noticed, i didn't just for you. :p

    dahlusion commented on Mellow Pain

    09-17-2010

    A day in the life poem. nice imagery. peace and light, dah
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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