In Transit

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    In Transit

    Swimming thru invisible on my way to work
    My mind overloaded with adamant murk 
    I am late, snooze button curse, no one really cares
    Failure and grandeur on Manhattan streets, beggars and millionaires
    Glory-ish morning under a thick orange sky
    Seagulls soaring, got something in my Nazi-blue eye
    Deep in the thoughts, some mundane, some too abstract
    Fabricating fantasy, fixing faithlessness, fearing firing, fighting fact
    Clothes adequately decent, expertly combed down hair
    Purchasing a ticket, pedestrianism gets me nowhere
    I blend in with the crowd on the crowded train station
    We pile up in the downtown bound, mass asphyxiation
    The train rolls down rusty tracks, thru façade, thru underbelly
    State of the art infrastructure, thru places increasingly helly
    Brought to desolation by our drivers, brace for a bumpy ride
    Even this has its beauty, in a certain neon light
    Dead cats and broken headlights and people we’ll never know
    Wistful eyes, crazy crack, I’m just going with the seven thirty flow
    People get on and people get off, the vexing spirals of life
    Heartbroken and indifferent faces , in the sparse and in the rife
    We were told that there was plenty
    So many destinations, train half-empty
    I don’t believe in future, don’t care much for past
    Necessity, obsessive greed, things to be the last
    I hate what I’m doing, we’re angels breathing the beast
    Fond of air-condition as the train rolls further east
    Whistles, sirens, a few missed calls and a promise of eternity
    Hopes, dreams, disasters, ambivalence, hate, debris
    Larger than life celebrities on some pale blue dot
    I enjoy the feel of the weather, content with decay and rot
    Walls obstruct the view as we go beneath the earth
    Tunnels twisting thru the unseen, subterranean rebirth
    Commuting commuters communicating through screens of LED
    Replies transatlantic, four thousand miles of heartfelt honesty
    Implausible connections, blowing my mind like hollow points
    Iconoclastic serenity, courtesy of escapist morning joints
    Station after station, we stop and we start
    Beautiful strangers rekindling my copy-pasted heart
    Billboards and neon names, a golden idol of random shit
    Steam, smoke and smog, men and mice racing thru it 
    I fight of a persistent erection as another train zooms by
    Eyeballs severely twitchy, I’m way to fucking high
    We’re still mending our wounds, bullets we’ve bitten
    I look around the car, our similarities truly well hidden
    Brakes, full stop, I get up and exit
    I run a few blocks, you think I can make it?
    Swimming thru invisible on my way around

    Wish me luck staying aground

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    winterkou commented on In Transit

    09-06-2010

    Ok. This one I mosty certaintly like alot of imagery. a 10 from me , two thumbs up. a nice masterpiece

    rsalassi commented on In Transit

    09-06-2010

    What an amazing coincidence!!! The poem that got me into trouble with the little 17-year-old banshee was about a bus stop! I shall say no more, wxcept in this case, I like the poem.

    stigbohnolsen

    09/06/2010

    any chance you could provide me with a link to the poem? You've made me rather curious!

    rsalassi

    09/06/2010

    See Lunabella's "Bus Stop" but pay attention to our exchange.

    stigbohnolsen

    09/07/2010

    It seems she has erased your entire correspondence

    rsalassi

    09/07/2010

    Fortunately, I haven't. send me an e-mail

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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