Wildfire

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    Wildfire

    Wildfire

     

     

    I feel your force

    sweeping across

    my body and soul;

    consuming me

    with such speed

    nothing seems to

    stop your advances

    or stand in your way

    as you overtake me,

    stealing my breath,

    leaving me

    unable to breathe,

    dazed,

    burning me up

    with that stare

    down to my soul,

    I am unable

    to put you out

    of my mind,

    how your wildness

    pulls me in,

    stirring feelings

    so strong

    I long to be

    engulfed whole;

    knowing reason

    will never be able

    to extinguish

    my unquenchable    

    desire to be

    taken by you.

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    SavVySam commented on Wildfire

    02-05-2010

    Combustible piece that you have penned here! lol Keep that fire extinguisher close! Nice write!
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    knight4696 commented on Wildfire

    02-04-2010

    Charles ... You capture the intense feelings of longing and desire perfectly - Lust or Love - they both fit! Nice work! :) Ken
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    Teardrops commented on Wildfire

    02-04-2010

    Now thats the way you write love and say love lol great poem charles and you know the words of love my friend Marie
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