Tree

8 Comments

Tags:
  • Thought Provoking

    Tree

    she grew into a tree
    branches of honey
    dipping leaves into pools of plenty
    the forest fed her
    the winds soothed her
    the skies washed her
    and the snows bruised her
    before the end of time took her away
    seed by seed
    around the earth
    sprouting sister     islands of mirth
    around her girth
    the squirrels would chatter
    merry moments of mad hatter laughter
    each bird in her branches
    blessed her with natures gentle touch
    the monarch
    the lark
    the magpie and owl
    all friends of hers
    she knows them so well
    her tongue reaches deep into the earth
    sucking from corpses
    and bowels of red dirt
    the life giving
    intravenous gift
    of water till it hurts
    she fills her sails with the sound of angels
    a tree of desire never meant for the fire
    so grand is she
    i can only     sit beneath her great leaves
    and peer into the stars of her canopy
    and wish that i were as majestic
    as this silent, ageless wreath
    of color and mystery

    Poem Comments

    (8)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    scrye commented on Tree

    07-24-2009

    BRAVO *applauds* there are no words to describe this amad being a nature person this touches me deeply. and couldn't be happier to see it come from you. Pure talent and a 10 from me my friend. Again Bravo.
    Reply to Comment

    sammia commented on Tree

    07-24-2009

    wow this is beautiful. i like the flow of this. it does seem like everyone takes the beauty of nature for granted and dont care anymore. Great write.
    Reply to Comment

    am2anangel commented on Tree

    07-22-2009

    Absolutely amazing I was torn between deciding if you were really talking about a tree or a woman. lol! You gave this work life a pleasing vision of natures truest glory. Well done.
    Reply to Comment

    photochick commented on Tree

    07-22-2009

    wow this is amazing great poem about the beautiful things in nature that so many take for granted thanks for sharing this is great going into my favs that's for sure very powerful so much passion in each line a 10 all the way in my book I was able to picture every line as i read I look forward to reading more
    Reply to Comment

    exotic commented on Tree

    07-21-2009

    This is a wonderful piece, full of life in every word, your choose of words is deffinitely an inspiration for us poets, I enjoy this piece word by word..you are great amad
    Reply to Comment

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    AmadeusEx’s Poems (89)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Icebreakers 0 05/29/2011
    I can't believe this is FANTASY 1 04/17/2011
    Minstrel 7 11/29/2010
    Lust 15 09/20/2010
    Wanderlust 6 08/27/2010
    Carving Pumpkins 4 07/19/2010
    Brothers 3 07/19/2010
    Second Chances 8 07/17/2010
    The Infinite Appeal 4 07/09/2010
    A Song for the Departed 3 06/30/2010
    I Die the Next Day 4 06/28/2010
    There Are No Bubbles 3 06/21/2010
    Ephemeral Dream Girl 2 06/16/2010
    Idle While.... 6 06/16/2010
    crossing bridges 8 06/09/2010
    King Forever 2 06/04/2010
    To Deceitful Eyes 1 06/01/2010
    Star Burning Bright 5 05/23/2010
    Swirling in the Tidewater 4 04/20/2010
    An Inch Away from Daylight 3 04/16/2010
    Shovelful of Earth 6 04/12/2010
    American Highway 1 04/09/2010
    Bitches Be Loco 4 03/28/2010
    Eddies of Fate 3 01/09/2010
    Magnified 5 12/15/2009
    Legacy Part One 4 12/11/2009
    Moving Inexorably Further Behind 12 12/07/2009
    Salvation of the Roses 39 12/03/2009
    The Emptiness of Breathing 11 11/23/2009
    Fall Into the Stream and Hold Your Breath 6 11/20/2009
    The Bloom Of Death 18 11/17/2009
    Slancha Ireland... 3 10/30/2009
    My Death Inside Me 0 10/26/2009
    Dark Passenger 4 10/01/2009
    No Salvation for the Saved 0 09/24/2009
    In the End we Pray... 1 09/14/2009
    I Walk With You 3 09/07/2009
    Regret of the Rarely Seen 9 08/31/2009
    This Daughter of Ours 4 08/31/2009
    This Day is Gone 8 08/27/2009
    Ladykiller 14 08/19/2009
    Insider 5 08/12/2009
    Bone 3 08/10/2009
    Ode to Holy Mountain 6 08/02/2009
    A Rembrandt in my Pocket 7 07/23/2009
    Tree 8 07/21/2009
    My Demented Decline 7 07/17/2009
    The Never Said 16 07/14/2009
    23 Seconds 14 07/14/2009
    The Blood of Ours 10 07/12/2009
    My Death Will Rise 7 07/10/2009
    Immortality of Youth 2 07/06/2009
    Shelter Seeker 12 07/06/2009
    I Took Her 9 07/01/2009
    The Bones of the Clown 8 07/01/2009
    Nothing But our Nights 27 06/29/2009
    Atlas and Pandora (the Strength and the Plague) 16 06/28/2009
    Sign 4 06/27/2009
    Rainbow Warrior 7 06/27/2009
    Grandma' 1 06/26/2009
    FOG IN THE GARDEN 0 06/25/2009
    Faith of An Unbeliever 12 06/22/2009
    ELEVATOR 5 06/21/2009
    Dual We You or Me... 1 06/17/2009
    As A Child 8 06/15/2009
    Heroes and Cowards 5 06/15/2009
    Shaitan 2 06/15/2009
    A Legacy 0 06/15/2009
    Beauty Awaits 2 06/15/2009
    Only So Far 4 06/02/2009
    A Composition of Sin 5 06/02/2009
    Bitter Salt in a Laboring Heart 0 06/02/2009
    Unmeant 3 06/01/2009
    Death of Promise 5 05/02/2009
    I'll Never Wake Up Free 2 03/31/2009
    Bleak 1 06/02/2009
    Paper Walls 4 01/30/2009
    At The Edge of Ruin 4 01/09/2009
    Kingdom in our Hearts 2 01/05/2009
    Air And Smoke 4 01/05/2009
    Eyes Struck Blind 3 01/05/2009
    You and I 3 01/05/2009
    Miz Understood Dream 2 12/30/2008
    One Escape 0 12/30/2008
    Heaven 3 12/30/2008
    Halo 3 12/30/2008
    Glass in Hand 2 12/30/2008
    Digital Legs 4 12/30/2008
    Immolated 4 12/29/2008
    Top of Page