Halo

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    Halo
    addiction wont let me sleep
    i cant cry i only weep
    and the creep that follows
    the pills i swallow
    cant seem to banish
    all of my fears that lie awake
    and languish
    my hits come faster
    and my inhales hit me deeper
    running on the heels
    of shortened time
    fucked up
    in the midst of my prime
    my devotion
    my crime
    this young boy in the mirror of history
    destined to never repeat
    or remember fully
    the heart that beats
    my body
    my heat
    it quickens
    it slows
    but i will never know
    my destiny
    my questions remain
    unanswered mysteries
    and the hit that takes me
    fools and protects
    the morning wakes me
    so i can shoot and neglect
    while i search for you
    the love in my mind
    my saviour
    my angel
    my holy halo

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    SEVEN commented on Halo

    11-23-2009

    This addiction thingy is a total bummer I somehow know the feeling...It totally had control of me but it wasnt about drugs it was much worse which I refuse to commey on it but I saw myself somewhat in this piece....good write....kudos
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    AmadeusEx

    11/23/2009

    thanks sev...check out the newer ones though...halo is probably six years old

    Desmotti commented on Halo

    06-30-2009

    The downs are everywhere..and the chains hold our heads for us even if it is submerged in toxin. the Halo is a primordial gift from the light within, or above...though we are all from above in the beginning, and eventually. Sadness of the wastes hit home with this one...I puddle hopped for many year through miseries mindfields...break geppetos hold and be your own puppet master...if master ye be...then let this be a salud to recognition of liberation.
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    kittman101 commented on Halo

    06-29-2009

    This one seems to depict a time of taking druges and maybe hoping not to wake up, yet each morning you did. and each time you thanksed god for giving you a new day of life
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