I Die the Next Day

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I Die the Next Day

 

falling asleep gently i wonder
if i ever had a chance

dreams crush me with impossible romance


i awake tasting the taint

of what could be if only i

stripped away the gleam of glory


im crying silently

i feel it in my lungs

im thinking of the people

that i have forgotten

its in my nostrils

its behind my eyes

its pressure that i hate

and its falling down my cheeks

in rivers


unstoppable


the guilt i feel


unredeemable


the years i have lost are


unretrievable


nothing worse than being alone

after an unanswered phonecall

as the liqour fades to amber shades


and the women have left

in disgust

and i wonder who i have left

to trust

the songwriter who destroys me

is playing viciously

staring at an old picture

of what i used to be

wisely i stop crying and let

the music wash away

my ironclad regret and my

selfish undeserved shame

i never get to walk away

i die the next day

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ShanneN commented on I Die the Next Day

07-14-2010

i connected soooooooooooooooooo much to this... it is amazing, so much that iwanna cry now... but i wont haha. great job!!

ginga commented on I Die the Next Day

07-03-2010

AmadeusEx, A poem of angst, sorrow, and gloomy passion that serves up what hardships anxiety and shame do to leave one lonely. Painful. ginga

wordCollective commented on I Die the Next Day

06-28-2010

wow, so much passion and emotion..... remember its the same deep thoughts and feelings that make you the great writer you are!

redbloodink commented on I Die the Next Day

06-28-2010

You know Ama you have such talent...... I feel this song I have lived this song.... Now I just write different songs...... red

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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