stayin awake

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  • catarino
  • Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.

stayin awake

waters
hemmorage, penetrating
manmade barriers.

further
into the darkness,
fear becomes real.

deeper
into the prison,
walls thicken.

but a peaceful freedom persists.

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JadedJezzabel commented on stayin awake

05-21-2009

SIMPLE AND LYRICLY DEVINE YOUR WORDS TICKELED MY TASTE BUDS FOR WHATS YET TO COME......ITS INTERESTING THAT YOU WOULD REFER TO FREEDOM IN PRISON....A PROFOUND POINT OF VIEW

lightcourier commented on stayin awake

05-19-2009

Internally insurmountable! Nice work. Thanks!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

catarino’s Poems (42)

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finding Tinoco 1
thanks(for)gi
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9
the forgiveness of skin 6
we are memorable 4
broken beat 3
water song 2
subtle 0
days 0
time always 1
inicio 2
to a new friend 1
(close to you) 0
editing 'Almagest'--- i guess. 0
prayer 2
notes 1
jellyfish 2
lingering 3
flirting 4
here and there 5
candy 5
stayin awake 2
( ) 1
lagos 6
Conflict of Gods 2
a dream response 3
time? 1
thoughts 3
sluggish 1
silence is a sheild 4
deciding to jump @ Davenport 3
death is treasure 2
pause 6
homeless 2
tossin and turnin 2
father 2
close to being further 2
meeting you 2
Revision 2
Amiga 3
Commitment and wishes 2
spider and butterfly 7