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My everyday is now stained
With the memories of
Moments we shared-
Holding on.
Quietly, I disguise
The need to cry
As life passes by-
Without me
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6 Comments
Tags: Lost Love
- catarino
- Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.
My everyday is now stained
With the memories of
Moments we shared-
Holding on.
Quietly, I disguise
The need to cry
As life passes by-
Without me
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11-10-2009
- I like the unique way you have of putting your thoughts across. You are definitely a wordsmith in a class by yourself. Your good, no your par excellence. And the music you make lingers on and I dab at another tear....
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08-09-2009
- you are a poet! i am a friend of your work great write! Congrats!
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jademelissa74 commented on pause
06-02-2009
- The content is deep, yet clear to the reader. You exhibit a well depicted message. I really enjoyed this poem. A ten from me! :))
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AbysmalGoddess commented on pause
05-14-2009
- I read it again and I'm still in awe by it, i love this poem just as much and more as 13days 19 hours and 11 minutes ago!
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AbysmalGoddess commented on pause
04-30-2009
- short and sweet, just how it should be.
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