spider and butterfly

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  • Lost Love
    • catarino
    • Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.

    spider and butterfly


    The train wakes the rails as we
    lay in bed unafraid of the morning.

    your love aches and we listen
    to the silence break with the shaking

    windows of hobos singing out
    from the frozen backs of
    railroad cars-

    "what town is this?"

    and you whisper to me, "your love
    travels on the notes of their screams."

    I turn away as a spider enamors
    the colorful blur of a butterfly's wings in the
    corner of your bedroom ceiling.

    "CHICO!",
    a student cries out from the street-
    your eyes weeping even as you smile,

    turning toward me from inside the sheets.
    i ache for your love and punish your skin.

    will you ever forgive me?

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    WordSlinger commented on spider and butterfly

    08-24-2010

    This is fantastic, you can hear the sheets, and the breathes, amazing, ty WS

    klassik commented on spider and butterfly

    08-09-2009

    don't read this anymore, it will give you writers block the true essence of bitter sweet, great write! congrats

    NenaT commented on spider and butterfly

    08-08-2009

    This is an excellent poem.....you are a gifted poet. What more can I say?

    Jay690P commented on spider and butterfly

    06-06-2009

    The implied parallel between the spider/butterfly and the lover/loved one is beautifully achieved; "train wakes the rails," with its continuing trail of assonant rhyme is an effect of which any poet should be proud. You wail!

    tenderpoison commented on spider and butterfly

    06-05-2009

    truly enjoyed this...especially "Chico" (my brother got his degree there...what a crazy place!) anyway, I loved this write and the title is perfect...love is sometimes the destroyer of beauty. thank you for writing it.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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