Rapture

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    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Rapture
    Her picture,
    shows her eyes allure,
    her smile is still
    my rapture.
    In twilight frost,
    her presence there all
    framed in sterling silver,
    to hold me now as colors are lost,
    yet gentle is her promise.
    I find her here
    when I need her near,
    when her I miss,
    for she my soul does capture.


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    tierra7 commented on Rapture

    12-23-2009

    O h My Grito, you capture so much of your energy upon your canvass...such a serene write..i can feel the softness of a breath...Lovely...very Lovely....tis nice...to have the love of your life's soul share with the eyes of the heart...you are soooo Blessed !! ~sigh~ totally priceless....Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )
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    Grito

    12/23/2009

    Thank you very much sweet Tierra, and blessings to you too!!!

    knight4696 commented on Rapture

    11-16-2009

    The simplicity of this poem is fantastic. So simple that it makes it a joy to read - an easy flowing tribute to you're loved one. Great write Grito! Ken
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    Grito

    11/16/2009

    Thank you very much Ken, I like to write short poems!!

    dancinghawk commented on Rapture

    10-15-2009

    my favorite thing about this piece ... is that you keep to the universal ... "Her picture" is as concrete as it gets ... and from there, this speaks to all, for who doesn't have such a picture, and such a frame? hair color - not important; "gentle is her / promise." - important :) thx for another beautiful post!
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    Grito

    10/15/2009

    Universal love, thank you for your excellent review and visit gracious Dancing hawk!!!

    mdpoetgirl commented on Rapture

    10-01-2009

    Aw, so touching... beautifully written. I feel the love...
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    Grito

    10/01/2009

    THank you very much for your great review kind mdpoetgirl!!!

    danmartyjake1 commented on Rapture

    09-06-2009

    this is beautiful and simple... I really like it........great stuff!
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    Grito

    09/06/2009

    Great words to read, thank you most kind MJ!!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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