Wind

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    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Wind
    The planets swirl,
    they do unfurl,
    to all the dark dispel.

    A pure gentle beam
    runs around the world,
    your soul it is I see.

    You are the wind
    your breeze is gold,
    come to settle my unease.

    A ship at sail
    caught in your gale
    awash in it's bell I be.

    O cosmic realm
    from whence I yell
    you have set me free.

    And then I fell,
    a speck of sand,
    my soul laying in your hand.


     © 2009

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    AIXA commented on Wind

    04-14-2009

    I love the style, how you rhyme, only one kind, from all the time!!!
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    Grito

    08/29/2009

    Besos y abrazos!!!

    lightcourier commented on Wind

    04-11-2009

    I really liked the pace of this. It has a lot of movement. Nice. Thanks.
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    Grito

    08/29/2009

    Thank you very much kind Light!!!

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