Moonglow
The clouds are aglow,
Their edges silhouetted in the night sky.
She breaks free,
Golden and perfect.
Moon-glow touches me,
Revealing my path.
"Come,"
She silently beckons,
"Come this way."
Moonglow
3 Comments
Tags: Peace
- mlea
- Very excited and very grateful. My son Michael will be coming back to American soil in about 12 days I want to thank all of you for your prayers and well wishes and strength.
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Madelynn commented on Moonglow
11-13-2009
- Oh yes! How beautiful she is! I have such an affair with the moon, every piece I read dedicated to her illumination brings me such peace. Your words are a magikal path, inviting your reader to journey! Your an exceptional, writer mlea!-Maddi
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11/14/2009
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PamelaALamppa commented on Moonglow
10-09-2009
- Sounds like an adventure about to begin. I enjoyed this glimpse into something a bit mysterious. Nicely done. ~Pamela
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10/09/2009
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laydbak1 commented on Moonglow
06-13-2009
- I like this, only i would've used silvery white as the color of the moon's light as it steps from behind the clouds, but i enjoyed the painted picture you drew of it and how you personified the moon with a voice as well... A good write...
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