Word Play

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

    Poem Commentary

    just playing with words. almost sure i got all the meanings right. if not then no worries, its only play the words dont seem to mind.

    Word Play

    Theoretically undisturbed,

    Medically wholesome,

    Psychologically devastated,

    Astrologically in-check,

    Physically sufficient,

    Anthropologically average,

    Metaphorically dead,

    Empirically living,

    Scrupulously determined,

    Affectionately malnourished,

    Quite truthfully alone.  

     

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    chemicalcuke commented on Word Play

    05-24-2011

    Gosh Hannah, you scare me sometimes. Its so good. I wanna cry. Not only because its so brilliant, but also because of the fear that I may have caused some of this. I'm so paranoid. This piece is . . . synthetic.
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    hannahxP

    05/24/2011

    how is it synthetic? no worries about me brandon iv got everything taken care of =]

    chemicalcuke

    05/26/2011

    It's synthetic because of the way it all comes together. The wording is beyond fantastic. You are beyond fantastic. A beautiful little princess :)

    hannahxP

    05/29/2011

    synthetic is a fake or immitation lol are you sure on your deffinition of synthetic? lol

    chemicalcuke

    05/29/2011

    I looked the word up online. The Webser definition included ": relating to or involving synthesis ( the dialectic combination of thesis and antithesis into a higher stage of truth; the composition or combination of parts or elements so as to form a whole ) "

    hannahxP

    06/03/2011

    its denotation is a complement but its conotation is an insult, (i think?)

    chemicalcuke

    06/10/2011

    It's just an overall great write, to say the least

    gregster commented on Word Play

    05-21-2011

    Word Play Theoretically undisturbed, Medically wholesome, Psychologically devastated, Astrologically in-check, Physically sufficient, Anthropologically average, Metaphorically dead, Empirically living, Scrupulously determined, Affectionately malnourished, nicce awesom
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    scotslad60 commented on Word Play

    05-18-2011

    Totally Thesaurus! :p It took me a bit to get my mind's tongue round these big words so early in the morning. Thanks for frying my brain. lol
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    hannahxP

    05/19/2011

    haha no problem=] everyone needs a good brain frying every once and awile

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