Confused much

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  • Confusion
    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

    Poem Commentary

    nice to play with plain old end rhyme as aposed to blank verse every once and awile

    Confused much

    Hiding from everywhere

    Questioning the very air

    Paint slides off your smiling face

    Turning into a basket case

    Running from reality

    Questioning formality

    Trying on the worst of life

    Camping out the worst of strife

    Wiping tears back from your face

    Wind blows my hair out of place

    Hiding in the rims of glasses

    Running from the common masses

    The owl’s flight brings news of fright

    Suicide dreams in the dead of night

    Light bulbs casting out dark matter

    Going as mad as a hatter

    Space fills all that’s absent

    Did you get that cab I sent?

    Water drenches all that quenches

    The rich sleeping on park benches

    Not a antagonistic just a coward

    Drinking juice of the solar powered

    What’s filtered through those sunglasses?

    The light is too, avoiding the masses

    Awkward words come shooting out

    Believe me no need to shout

    Just let me be

    Who I am

    Let me be

    While I am

    Where I am

    Why I am

    Just help me find me

    I need the right equipment to see

    The hermits are social networking

    All the blokes are sitting smirking

    Fingertips burn like cigarettes

    Passing steaks on to the pests

    Silly being a mover and a shaker

    Now it’s time to meet you maker

    A palindrome for a heading

    But now it seems the sun is setting

     

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    gregster commented on Confused much

    05-21-2011

    very nice and catchy.can be a rap song..well its a 10 .i like the flow...do read His grace is sufficient eh

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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