lost cause

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  • Loss
    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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    lost cause

    i know you dont know how i feel,
                                       cuz you're not crying.
    i know you dont feel my pain,
                                       cuz you're not dying.
    if you knew me,
       you would notice.
              &
    if you cared,
       you would ask.

    please stop pretending.
    you dont know me, &
          if you do then you dont care.
    so stop acting suprised when you see,
    that even i have my burdens to bear.
           

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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