Denial

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    Denial

     Not sure how to feel,
    Nothing seems real.
    My mind just won't work,
    I cover my blank slate with a smirk.
    Rather see them glare then risk getting hurt.

    Is this really happening?
    Theres too much to absorb.
    Even the air feels fake.
    When i breath im still drowning.

    Because the world is lying.
    It just has to be
    So why dose this seem so tangible?
    It has to be a lie, it just has to be!
    dosnt it?

    Im not shure how to act.
    If the world is lying to me,
    then i need to lie right back.

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    arronpalmer commented on Denial

    11-13-2010

    Very clever poem about you're struggle with accepting something you don't wish to accept. Sometimes, it can be very hard to write about something like denial, rather than something that fully happened, but you do it well here. Your conclusion to fight fire with fire may not be the answer long term, but it fits well with the panic and angst you describe in the preceeding stanzas. Loved it Hannah! Looking forward to you posting more :)
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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