Rat Race

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    • Anata wa Naraku no hana ja nai ~ You are not a flower of Hell

    Rat Race

     See them scatter 
    Watch them hurry
    Scramble about in an exasperated flurry

    Rush about here
    Run around there

    Appointments, Work, Children's activities
    The rat race of life becomes a disease
     
    No time to admire the simple things in life
    How we are all so well trained

    Finding our way through the maze every day
    Each seeking out the cheese 

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    Sx9 commented on Rat Race

    11-20-2010

    YES THEY SAY THE RACE IS FOR THE FAST,BUT FOR HOW LONG,RATS LOVE CHEESE AND SO ,ITS NOT ENOUGH FOR ALL,AND THE RACE CONTINUE,FOR SOME ALWAYS THINK THAT HASTE MAKE TIME BUT AS YOU KNOW THAT IS NOT TRUE,SO HOLD ON AND KEEP THE FAITH,,LOVE YOUR VIBES,,
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    mustascheman commented on Rat Race

    11-06-2010

    How true, how true! Most of the time I feel that we are the ones in the cages. Cool little ditty. A.T.
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