I Love You And I Told You So

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    • Anata wa Naraku no hana ja nai ~ You are not a flower of Hell

    I Love You And I Told You So
    'I love you' you said to me one day
    To which I replied no you don't
    For you it is just a game
    Protest you did until you were blue in the face
    Contesting my words 
    Swearing to me upon every last grave
    Now as I stand alone facing you as you stare at me blank
    All I can muster is 'I told you so' 
    As I walk away 

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    Topaz2011 commented on I Love You And I Told You So

    01-15-2011

    a delightful read! very to the point and in the face.
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    cheronld commented on I Love You And I Told You So

    01-14-2011

    Lol....I love the comedic feel to this write....but it also holds so much truth....great flow...Cher
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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