I Surrender

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    I Surrender

     I'm tired of all
    these games you play
    one day you love me
    the next you don't

    You play with my heart
    and tear apart
    no wonder I don't know
    where to start

    You say you want me
    you tell me I'm the best
    love you have ever had
    then you cheat on me once again

    So I say to you
    I surrender
    for I don't know
    what else to do

    Life has become
    all about you
    my hopes and dreams
    mean nothing to you

    Has this just become
    a game to you
    what more do you
    expect me to do

    I live from day to day
    wih a broken heart
    never knowing
    where to start

    So I say to you
    I surrender
    for I don't know
    what else to do

    You would think that
    after all these years
    there would be more laughter
    and much fewer tears

    I don't know how
    or when it all went wrong
    I just know for now
    we don't get along

    So I say to you
    I surrender
    for I don't know
    what else to do

    I have given
    my whole life to you
    because I thought
    you loved me to

    Each time I look
    into your eyes
    it shatters my heart
    and I begin to cry

    I wish I knew
    just what to do
    to make our love
    as good as knew

    For now this will
    have to do
    forever my heart
    does belong to you

    So I say to you
    what more can I do
    I surrender
    all my love to you


    ~ Mary A. Eaton
    copyright 2009

    Tags: Broken, Love, Pain, Surrender

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    Passionkey commented on I Surrender

    04-05-2010

    yes, story of my life too.. this was beautiful. Love the song.xx
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    Mareann

    04/05/2010

    Thank you so much dear... I love songwriting, and poetry, it is my passion!!!!

    madane111 commented on I Surrender

    03-30-2010

    so simple yet full of life's living truth! we love, infidelity comes in hurting us, yet we continue loving...Beautifully done!
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    Mareann

    03/31/2010

    Why Thank you, I appreciate you reading and leaving a comment, Mary

    nhorlandi commented on I Surrender

    03-25-2010

    It seems that infidelity is becoming common nowadays. Such good examples: Tiger Woods/wife and Jesse James and Sandy Bullock. So next time be careful, you're old enough see? This piece is nicely crafted based on true feelings.
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    Mareann

    03/28/2010

    Oh, you have that right.... Why can't people stay in love? Mary

    Stryx commented on I Surrender

    03-19-2010

    "Good as knew'? I say never surrender to failure, and don't think you can change him. Imagination or truth, it's a sick love. But I'm no niner.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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