As It Was

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    As It Was

     She wants dreams
    like the homeless children on TV.
    She has pretty eyes
    that draw in all the hormonal boys.
    She has a big heart
    but what everyone sees are the breasts
    covering it.
    I can see past her.
    I can see her,
    beautiful,
    at ease.

    The way she is,
    as it was.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    RoseFromARose commented on As It Was

    09-07-2010

    This brings me back to childhood memories. Such a lovely innocent piece.
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    BringMeBullets

    09/23/2010

    Thank you... :)

    brandonheat commented on As It Was

    04-08-2010

    ive read all of your works and i think so far that this is my favorite :). i really enjoy reading your style of writing and wish i could do the same,all i write is lyrical and so i never get many ratings or comments. You write very beautiful works,perhaps you should look into publication :) David
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    BringMeBullets

    04/09/2010

    I have been thinking about publication... But everything has to be perfect... And I'm never satisfied with my work... It's a strange process. Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

    Jayandben commented on As It Was

    03-16-2010

    Very inspirational, and it's sad to know how many people are like this.
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    BringMeBullets

    03/16/2010

    Yeah. Sometimes the truth needs to be told. Thank you!

    sherry122 commented on As It Was

    03-09-2010

    Nice and simple write, real beauty is something that comes from within;)
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    BringMeBullets

    03/09/2010

    Thank you so much, Sherry. :)

    Dano commented on As It Was

    02-28-2010

    wanting...hoping... and needing for people to see past the surface of things... everything and everyone has depth and it all but ignored the cast majority of other people... good job as usual...
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    BringMeBullets

    03/02/2010

    Thank you, Dano. :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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