Same Excuses

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    Same Excuses

     It's the same thoughts,
    same blade.
    The same collapse
    of sanity.
    It's the same slur
    excuses, words.
    The same paranoia
    my insides purge.
    Because of you
    the world is ugly.
    Because of you,
    I must sin.
    Because of you
    I live selfishly.
    Because of you
    I kill again.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    ghostgirl commented on Same Excuses

    05-14-2010

    this poem has little words but says alot...when i was reading it i could see my past my life...the scars have faded but the wounds remain and this poem shows it...its inspirational
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    BringMeBullets

    05/17/2010

    Thank you so much... :)

    jesusfreake commented on Same Excuses

    03-23-2010

    different, deep, its thought provoking and dark too, but i like the way ur words move my emotions...i will definitely be reading more of u, u probably wont like any of my poems but "stir of the emotions" thats about as dark as i get with my poetry unfortunately, however im gonna try to write more dark poems like urs...ur inspiring me!
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    BringMeBullets

    03/24/2010

    Thank you so much! I'm glad I could be an inspiration! :)

    frog commented on Same Excuses

    03-23-2010

    This poem gave me goosebumps. I remember living the life of excuses. Thank you for reminding me of how it used to be.
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    BringMeBullets

    03/23/2010

    Thank you so much...

    xborntobeweirdx commented on Same Excuses

    03-22-2010

    Very nice play on words, I like this alot. Great job. It leaves alot of room for ones own interpritation.
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    BringMeBullets

    03/22/2010

    Thank you. :)

    Charlie23 commented on Same Excuses

    03-19-2010

    Your very talented. You can bring the message across without hitting specifics. I like that in writing.
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    BringMeBullets

    03/19/2010

    Thank you so much!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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