Without Fail

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    Today I was feeling a little down and perhaps overwhelmed by life's uncontrollable's - then a good friend helped me put things into perspective, while a stranger ironically showed me that life can change in an instant and that we should be grateful for what we have.

    Without Fail



    When the world is dropping out from underneath me
    And the sky is falling down on top of me

    I don't fight the wind; still I won’t give in
    There is something within me that helps me withstand the storms

    I am weak alone, sensitively fragile
    I always want to know the reason but often lack the understanding

    Regardless of the source of sorrow and pain
    Strength always finds me in the form of friends and family

    I can't give up, though at times it would be an easy thing to do
    For the thoughts and prayers of loved ones always helps me 
    through

     

    Without fail; I never fail to be reminded of all that I have!




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    thecross commented on Without Fail

    12-07-2010

    an uplifting and positive write being gracious and grateful always helps in finding your way down a tough road, good write
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    NativeAmeriGirl commented on Without Fail

    10-26-2010

    Such a profound and eloquent write my friend, smile.....In few words you have spoken volumes my friend.....You have truly touch that very part of my hearts soul, that is left only for poetry and you have seared it with wondrous words and talent......muchas gracias for allowing me to trespass......siempre, Native
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    Kanicki commented on Without Fail

    10-20-2010

    Excellent and beautifully crafted words of wisdom and inspiring! Peace, Light and Love
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    GypsySoul73 commented on Without Fail

    10-17-2010

    Beautifully written! Your perfectly chosen words echo the fragility of your mood. I can feel it. I was there with you. I am there with you. Peace, love and light on your path always. Gypsy Soul
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    soulwriter

    10/20/2010

    It is always a warm feeling of worth for one's writing when hearing that the reader truly feels the emotion intended.

    knight4696 commented on Without Fail

    10-06-2010

    This is definitely a face my friend! Such an inspirational poem. I really enjoy your work - write on pal! :) Ken
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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