Within This Glass

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    I drink from the cup of life... her pure essence is a spirit that intoxicates my soul

    Within This Glass


    I hold my world in a glass

    I cannot let it slip from my hands

    For if its substance should spill

    I would be left empty

     

            You are my world

            Liquid and flowing

            I have to drink you in

            Before you evaporate

     

    I have to consume you within me

    To devour you with my desires

    Not to simply satisfy a thirst

    But to mix your spirit with mine

     

            Here I am, take me

            Taste me and swallow me down

            Then let me pour myself

            ……………...into YOU

     

     

     





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    frog commented on Within This Glass

    05-28-2011

    OOOOOHHHH good stuff!!!!! Absolutely perfecto...write on!
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    soulwriter

    06/17/2011

    Oh, the first to read this one - thank you - greatly appreciate that you tip the glass.... Soul

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Within This Glass

    05-24-2011

    Sexy, Seductive, and Visually Stimulating. Well done..........E
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    soulwriter

    05/24/2011

    It warms the soul to know that you like this short piece.. thx Soul

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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