Crystal Iris

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    Crystal Iris
    Crystal Iris

    I could die inside those eyes
    A glorious death of honorable passing
    To be able to look into those mystic green mirrors and to behold my reflection
    Not seeing myself embodied, but the lust for me, the yearning of passion

    Even if we could not embrace, just knowing that I had been close enough for you to have held me so deeply within would make me purified
    In your gaze, I could partake of the heat and desire burning in your soul

    Though if a single tear were too slowly seep from the sea of your spirit saddened that there was no way for us to earthly climb within the physical crevices of pleasure - to place head upon breast in rest after the lingering sensations had left us weary

    The last you would see of me as you melted my heart into eternity would be the blueness of my eyes pleading for you to meet me on the other side

    .....As I close my eyes I envision a place beyond the heavens held just for you and I, that we might make love upon the clouds.

    jh

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    blackfootlady commented on Crystal Iris

    12-11-2009

    Really Beautiful and very unique!Nice work.I also enjoyed your work,Churv
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    soulwriter

    12/19/2009

    Your complimentary comments are super appreciated.

    SavVySam commented on Crystal Iris

    11-26-2009

    Really beautiful and smoothly flowing words of desire and love. Lines 12 & 13 made this poem for me...The turning of things to be then viewed through your eyes... I enjoyed your work.
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    soulwriter

    12/01/2009

    Many thank you are due you...

    latinangel commented on Crystal Iris

    09-08-2009

    WOW! This is a very steamy and romantic poem. I love steamy and romantic. Words like this might make me straight again. LOL Just beautiful, I don't know what else to say. You have a gift for words that just left me breathless. The imagery of your heart melting into eternity and the blueness of your eyes pleading to meet her on the other side. Just awesome! I am so glad I took a look at this one. You are so talented SW! I am so proud to call you my friend.
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    latinangel

    09/08/2009

    btw I am giving you a ten

    soulwriter

    09/08/2009

    Your words light my soul, for most every writer welcomes complimentary opinion. Thank you once again my friend.

    ginga commented on Crystal Iris

    08-07-2009

    soul, I can feel the depths of your passion for those greenest of eyes here. A beautiful litany of poetic verse dedicated to that obsession. I understand since I have been told similar things about my green eyes, but not in such an eloquent and lusty fashion. ginga
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    soulwriter

    08/10/2009

    I appreciate the comment - "feel the depth of my passion". I can't even tell you of the depth of my inspiration. Thank you.

    Chaos128 commented on Crystal Iris

    07-29-2009

    You got 'em eating out of your hand, SW, and it ain't hard to see why. You've got a real gift for lyricism, and you know what to do with it. I'm announcing right now that I'm giving you a 10... I ain't gonna take no chance on these groupies doggin' my tracks ha ha!
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    soulwriter

    07/29/2009

    Well most definitely have a way with words, thanks for the comments on mine.

    soulwriter

    10/05/2009

    Thank you Seawatchman for your time and comments, so true writing is a continual learning process, and full of rewards as we write more and more.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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