The Winter Warrior

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    The Winter Warrior

    On a cold winter night
    If you cup your hand just right
    And hold very, very still
    You can hear old man Rousse over on elm hill
    Faintly, ever so faintly heard
    Is the scrape of a shovel, without a spoken word
    After a snowfall he scrapes his drive bare
    And then he goes back and scrapes what isn’t there
    Paths laid out with metronome precision
    A result of a man with only snow in his vision
    Then he starts on roof and shingle
    Pulling down snow to where there’s none left to mingle
    Again he scrapes and scrapes his driveway bare
    And then he goes back and scrapes what isn’t there
    Then he starts on the front lawn
    For old man Rousse there’s never a prescient dawn
    The grass lay brown and combed with a rake
    With nary a sign of the aforementioned flake
    Then what space is left for the snow
    Is terraced as high as it will go
    Again he scrapes and scrapes and scrapes his driveway bare
    And then he goes back and scrapes what isn’t there
    So on a cold winter night
    If you cup your hand just right
    And hold very, very still
    You can hear old man Rousse over on elm hill
    Scraping, scraping, scraping a driveway so bare
    Scraping at what really isn’t there

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    SavVySam commented on The Winter Warrior

    08-28-2009

    A chilly tale of remembrance that will surely warm every heart. Great imagery and rhythm. Great work!

    towersongs commented on The Winter Warrior

    07-05-2009

    great work... seems like we all do this from time to time...swatting at non existant flies....creating worries that don't esist...on and on and on

    UnworthyFather commented on The Winter Warrior

    06-19-2009

    Very Nice!! You have painted a portrait of someone that would scare the crap out of me!! What is that disorder? OCD? Sounds like that is your man. Great write. Scarier to me than ghost, because this could be real. Like Jeffrey Dahmer or somebody. Thanks for sharing.

    ginga commented on The Winter Warrior

    06-09-2009

    You have captured a snippet in time that appeal to all my senses. I can hear the scrapes, feel the cold and snow. The fact that one continues to scrape and remove what is not there certainly reminds me of the spring ritual as well. Mowing and mowing grass that no longer can grow since the lackluster has been mowed and mowed out of it. A dustbowl I dare say!! I love this piece cause it is so true and so vivid! ginga

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