Love Done Left Here

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    A love relief, by choice!!

    Love Done Left Here
    Pick  up  your  things  and  walk  out  the  door
    Better  yet  I’ll  leave,  never  to  return  evermore
    Love  done  left  here,  
    Love  done  left  here  for  good
    Communication  is  cut  off  from  not  paying   to   listen
    The  reasons  why  we  are  here  are  for  seasons   gone
    Pleasure  has  left  because  our  Love  was  Never  Live
    Hanging  on  to  threads,  kept  in  a  closed  sewing  box
    Professing  need  a  little  to  late  to  straighten  the  situation
    Keeping  Up  with  them  Jonses  instead  of  caring  for  home
    Gold-Digging  for  Stature  to  Imaginary  Capture  Content
    Love  done  left  here,
    Love done  left  here  for  good
    Happy  days  return  when  your   face  is   far  gone
    Not  looking  to  destroy,  but  build  back  up  again
    There  are  no  fingers  to  point  without  fingers  being  turned  in
    Inside  the  right  thing  was   wrong  without  a  yearly  heart   checkup
    You  feint  a  love,  but  it  is  based  on  mind,  which  is  only  neck up
    Where  is  the  hearts  that  pump  in  and  out  automatically?
    Where  is  the  hand  that  connects  to  arms  lovingly caressing  us?
    We  are  two  trains  of  thought  travelling  in  different  directions
    Me  uptown  and  you  downtown, you  express  while  I  ride  local
    Love  done  left  here,
    Love  done  left  here  for  good
    Pick  up  your  things  and  walk  out  the  door

    Better  yet  I’ll  leave,  never  to  return  evermore

    Love  done  left  here,  

    Love  done  left  here  for  good

    Communication  is  cut  off  from  not  paying   to   listen

    The  reasons  why  we  are  here  are  for  seasons   gone

    Pleasure  has  left  because  our  Love  was  Never  Live

    Hanging  on  to  threads,  kept  in  a  closed  sewing  box

    Professing  need  a  little  to  late  to  straighten  the  situation

    Keeping  Up  with  them  Jonses  instead  of  caring  for  home

    Gold-Digging  for  Stature  to  Imaginary  Capture  Content

    Love  done  left  here,

    Love done  left  here  for  good

    Happy  days  return  when  your   face  is   far  gone

    Not  looking  to  destroy,  but  build  back  up  again

    There  are  no  fingers  to  point  without  fingers  being  turned  in

    Inside  the  right  thing  was   wrong  without  a  yearly  heart   checkup

    You  feint  a  love,  but  it  is  based  on  mind,  which  is  only  neck up

    Where  is  the  hearts  that  pump  in  and  out  automatically?

    Where  is  the  hand  that  connects  to  arms  lovingly caressing  us?

    We  are  two  trains  of  thought  travelling  in  different  directions

    Me  uptown  and  you  downtown, you  express  while  I  ride  local

    Love  done  left  here,

    Love  done  left  here  for  good!

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    FlowerGirl commented on Love Done Left Here

    10-30-2009

    Hello Silkytweed, I Enjoyed Reading This Piece, because, It Speaks From The Heart. What We Reveal From The Heart is Not Always Of A Pleasant Nature. However; To Reach Our True Destiny In Life, Our Ultimate, And Divine Purpose,...I Believe, That We Must Experience Both Good And Bad Emotion. Could Be Through Many Situations. Our Relationships, Careers, The Spiritual Aspect Of Our Lives, Etc. I Believe, That, All Of These Things, Are Important In Our Growth Process In Life And Even Necessary. We Must Try To Look Towards The upcoming Seasons, To See What "Awaits Us" Through Every Transition, And Rainy Storm, There, Is A Rainbow. Through All The Hardship, We Must Pray For The Strength And Courage For The Opening Of Our Minds And Hearts To See It! I Once Read, That, To See Perfection And Bear Witness To The Divine, Is To See Ourselves Through An Angel's Eyes... So, I Say To You, Let God Be Your Guide, (Smile) As Always, Thank You For Sharing, Flower Girl,
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    SILKYTWEED

    11/16/2009

    Thank you sooo much FlowerGirl your comments are on point and very encouraging....Thanks always friend!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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