CHEESE IN THE CRUST

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    Reminiscing on a trip to a grown man's amusement venue....with like of sweets.....

    CHEESE IN THE CRUST
    Happy  to   be  out  with  the  boys
    For  a  fun  night  of  gentlemen   fun
    For  some  its  escape,  for  others  play
    A  few  drinks ,  friendly  ranking  memories
    Only  able  to  gather  semi-annually,  happily
    To  proclaim  freedom, an  excuse  for  buck-wilding
    John,  Me  and  Pete  and  Pete’s  cousin  Larry
    Laughing  and  broadcasting  our  arrival  
    We  wait  on  line  to  be  searched   by  security
    Grown  men  with  boyhood  smiles  of  anticipation
    Curtains  draw  back  to clapping,   as  music  thumps ,
    Glitter  ball  shimmering,  reflecting  shards  on  bumps
    Of f  back  stops  and  back  shots  gyrating  bodily  lumps
    Front  seat  features,  serving  up  birds-eye  views
    Politely pointing  out  erogenous  spaces  to  hold  cheese
    We  the  hungry  audience  filled  with  lust  and  greed
    Motioning  for  a  closer  proximity  of  intimacy  
    Performed  thru  waves  of  ripples  and  tassled  nipples
    Taking  it  off  with  the  right  cheese  deployment
    Fives,  Tens   and   Twenties  get  all  the  attention
    Receiving  VIP  treatment  for   Two  or  Three  minutes
    Parting  with  cheese  with  promises  of  marriage
    If  she  will  let  my  horse  attached  to  her  carriage
    Relieved  of  all  my  cheese  we  are  both  nude
    Her  of  panties  and  me  of  voyeuristic  need
    Watching  her  walk away with  a  Crust  full  of  Cheese!


    Happy  to   be  out  with  the  boys
    For  a  fun  night  of  gentlemen   fun
    For  some  its  escape,  for  others  play
    A  few  drinks ,  friendly  ranking  memories
    Only  able  to  gather  semi-annually,  happily
    To  proclaim  freedom, an  excuse  for  buck-wilding
    John,  Me  and  Pete  and  Pete’s  cousin  Larry
    Laughing  and  broadcasting  our  arrival  
    We  wait  on  line  to  be  searched   by  security
    Grown  men  with  boyhood  smiles  of  anticipation
    Curtains  draw  back  to clapping,   as  music  thumps ,
    Glitter  ball  shimmering,  reflecting  shards  on  bumps
    Of f  back  stops  and  back  shots  gyrating  bodily  lumps
    Front  seat  features,  serving  up  birds-eye  views
    Politely pointing  out  erogenous  spaces  to  hold  cheese
    We  the  hungry  audience  filled  with  lust  and  greed
    Motioning  for  a  closer  proximity  of  intimacy  
    Performed  thru  waves  of  ripples  and  tassled  nipples
    Taking  it  off  with  the  right  cheese  deployment
    Fives,  Tens   and   Twenties  get  all  the  attention
    Receiving  VIP  treatment  for   Two  or  Three  minutes
    Parting  with  cheese  with  promises  of  marriage
    If  she  will  let  my  horse  attached  to  her  carriage
    Relieved  of  all  my  cheese  we  are  both  nude
    Her  of  panties  and  me  of  voyeuristic  need
    Watching  her  walk away with  a  Crust  full  of  Cheese!

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