Unbearable

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  • Lost Love

    Unbearable

    Unbearable.
    The heat from your body against mine.
    Sweat drenched sheets, sticky nights,
    and your shadow in the moonlight.
    Unbearable.
    Early morning light, an empty bed,
    and fresh footsteps from your unspoken flight.
    Unbearable.

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    evilgremlin commented on Unbearable

    06-26-2009

    Well you must be in love to write the way you write ,again nicely done!

    Romano commented on Unbearable

    06-25-2009

    nicely put, short and sweet.........................................................................

    BDIsernhagen commented on Unbearable

    06-24-2009

    wow. I LOVE your style. consider me a fan. Thank you for posting, and I hope this continues. I will be watching, reading...

    poetictrisha28

    06/26/2009

    Thank you for your comments! I find your works very interesting and imaginative. I especially like "sunrise" I could connect with the character in your poem(feel her pain) very beautiful

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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