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     You cut me,
    but you beg me not to bleed.
    You make me love you,
    but dare me to need you.
    You smother me,
    then ask me why I can't breathe.
    You set me on fire,
    then you are shocked when I get burnt.
    When am I going to learn?
    Loving you is like loving a mirror
    and there is only one side to your truth.
    I can't keep changing my view
    to see what you do.
    I GIVE UP!

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    wildpendigus commented on 1 side

    08-06-2009

    I think this is one of your best poems, I think also from a musical standpoint it would ne a good Pop Song Ballad, and I hear many possibilities that could make this song, or poem a hit recording from my expertise and what I know through the years, your very talented ! keep writing WP grecowong@yahoo.com
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    poetictrisha28

    08/06/2009

    Thank you very much I never thought about writing songs wouldn't really know where to begin but thanks for the kind words!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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