Break Free

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    Break Free

    It seems like I take a step forward
    just to get pushed two steps back.
    I forge ahead
    only to have my train,
    derailed from the track.
    I'm running into brick walls
    left and right.
    I'm not ready to give up
    I'm just exhausted,
    from this fight called life.
    They can't break me,
    don't they see?
    their attempts just make me,
    that much more determined,
    because I know the truth now,
    like a pastor knows his sermon.
    I wasn't put on this earth to suffer
    I just gotta find my purpose.
    And when I do
    the light will shine
    and it will all come to the surface.


     

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    Dano commented on Break Free

    04-08-2010

    there seems to be alot of strength in the peice... in the face of diverstiy and strugle you decide to stand and fight... bravo

    dawnjyc commented on Break Free

    03-30-2010

    Very nice poem about the strength of spirit in life. Keep fighting they can't break you!

    gogant commented on Break Free

    12-16-2009

    Life is a battle of survival..........I guess it would be kind of boring if it weren't. You put the emotional aspect to life with this one, Trisha.................................................................gogant

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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