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  • Lost Love

    U

    We belong together I
    just can't get you to see reality.
    We are soulmates I'm
    just not the only one you see.
    There are thoughts of you running constantly through my brain,
    yet the silence and distance between u and me continues to break my heart.
    We both said let go but I just kept hanging on to hope.
    Inside I know it's over your really gone,
    I just can't seem to come to terms with my grief.
    The loss of us was just too much for me to deal with,
    taking two steps forward and three steps back.
    Riding past your house to get a stolen glance of you,
    we can't be friends cause I'm still in love with you.
    At night I pray that when the sun rises the truth is
    a dream and the lie is reality.

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    Kdaddy commented on U

    09-14-2009

    The frustration and hurt of losing someone that felt so good to be with, oh what pain! Good job expressing emotion.

    smoothdame

    10/08/2010

    thank you for reading and responding to my poem.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    smoothdame’s Poems (29)

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