I can be

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    I can be

     The love in your life
    the one you call wife,
    your shining star.
    The most beautiful
    girl in the world,
    The most understanding
    friend you've ever had.
    Your rock if you let me
    your strength when
    you are at your worse.
    All the joy you can get
    all the passion you can take.
    Forever if you would have me
    patient if you can stand me.
    Honest if you can grasp it
    on your side always
    if you can believe it.
    Everything your heart
    desires if you let me in.

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    WordSlinger commented on I can be

    11-11-2010

    Yes also this reminds me of the movie notebook, thank you WS
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    smoothdame

    11/11/2010

    thank you fro taking the time to read and respond to my poem.

    smoothdame commented on I can be

    11-09-2010

    thanks for the love and thank you for reading and responding to my poem.
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    JadedJezzabel commented on I can be

    11-05-2010

    BRAVO........THIS REMINDS ME OF THE MOVIE THE NOTEBOOK...WHEN SHE TELLS HIM HE'S DUMB AND HE SAYS I CAN BE THAT.......I CAN BE (THIS OR THAT WHATEVER HE SAID) THEN SAID I CAN BE WHATEVER YOU WANT ME TO BE
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    smoothdame

    11/05/2010

    that is where I got my inspiration for this poem from and then i applied it to real life.

    JadedJezzabel

    11/12/2010

    thats awesome

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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