Good Enough

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    Good Enough

     The queen I am never made you smile.
    The vision I presented never made your heart pound.
    The technique I used never made you stay.
    That's okay cause I've always been good enough for me.
    The song I sang never made you cry.
    The sacrifices I made never made you proud.
    The knowledge I gained never made you learn.
    That's fine cause everything I am is good enough for me.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Good Enough

    10-29-2010

    bravo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if more young women thought like this the world would be a better place.
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    smoothdame

    10/30/2010

    I agree that is why I chose to share this poem in the first place I wanted women tothink outside the box.

    sweetchinee commented on Good Enough

    10-29-2010

    i absolutely love this one!!! the words so powerful and catching from the very first line.... deep and full of emotion... keep it up chick!
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    smoothdame

    10/30/2010

    Breakups are hard sometime but when somthing is bothering me I use it in my poetry.

    WordSlinger commented on Good Enough

    10-22-2009

    this is a head strong write, some people dont realize what people do for them, alot have a alot of growing up to do.
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    smoothdame

    10/22/2009

    thanks for reading my poem.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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