Like That

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  • Lost Love

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    You tend to think alot after a breakup and I just wrote down my thoughts.

    Like That

     Goodbye's are never easy,
    but they have to come.
    Goodbye was the best thing for us,
    I was too wraped up in you to see myself.
    I have to get back to me,
    hope you understand.
    I only want you to be happy,
    to move on with your life with no hard feelings.
    Things are just like that,
    relationships fall apart.
    Fear wins so easily, sorry I let you down,
    sorry I made you frown.
    Love is like that, love is pain,
    love is insecurity, love is blind,
    love is war.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Like That

    10-29-2010

    like the raw honest ugly truth in this....you pulled no punches here girl..... i love it
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    I was in a place of honesty and I went with it.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Like That

    10-06-2010

    I like the clearcut wording. Good job! ( * _* )...............................
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    smoothdame

    10/08/2010

    Thanks for the support, and thanks for reading my poem.

    Dano commented on Like That

    04-16-2010

    honest heartfelt words and true emotions spoken quite as-matter-factly... nice write
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    smoothdame

    04/16/2010

    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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