All of me

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  • Looking Back At Yesterday

    All of me

     How dare you change your mind
    and stop loving me, when I gave you everything.
    How dare you smile and laugh with her,
    while I am left with all the pain.
    How dare you comment that I was the one to blame,
    when you cheated, lied and played your mind games.
    It hurts to breathe sometimes,
    yet I take pride in the fact that each breath I take,
    proves I can live without you.
    I'm taking back my feelings because the saddest
    thing in the world is loving someone who used to love you.
    I swear honey I don't miss you, I miss who I thought you were,
    kind, beautiful and worthy of my heart.
    High off of love once, now in a downward spiral
    yet I am grateful we were once connected.
    Crazy but I like the way it hurts,
    you have taught me the hardest lesson of love,
    it coldly ends but the fire is worth the pain.

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    sweetchinee commented on All of me

    12-03-2010

    This poem was definitely written with a lot of emotion which I feel as I read.... beautifully expressed... looking forward to reading more....
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    smoothdame

    12/03/2010

    thank you it was very emotional for me to write but it was something that i needed to get off my chest.

    Chaos128 commented on All of me

    12-01-2010

    It reminds me of a Friedrich Nietzsche: "That which does not kill us makes us stronger." Although most of us could do just fine without the experience. A common theme singularly and originally expressed.
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem.

    Maxsbabyforever commented on All of me

    12-01-2010

    My... You continue to amaze me.... Keep writing. It's amazing the talent you have...
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    I will and thank you for the love and reading and responding to my poem.

    JadedJezzabel commented on All of me

    12-01-2010

    i hear you i think we all like the way it hurts............write on
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    thank you I will. I know I write alot about love but it helps me through the tough times.

    WordSlinger commented on All of me

    12-01-2010

    I hear that, we all are burnt, I believe in one way or the other, or fried, ty WS
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond to my work.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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