Twilight Passage

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    Poem Commentary

    This poem is about that small slice of time when it is very late at night and very early in the morning at the same time, when one's consciousness is super-open and intuition is heightened, the moments between those last moments of being awake, and the beginning moments of drifting to sleep....and an incredible full moon!

    Twilight Passage

    Early morning
    Twilight glows
    Secret passage
    Thought unfolds
    Now in Being
    Truths are told
    They settle in deep
    Taking strong hold
    Subconscious impressions
    Take root in my soul
    Stars are still shining
    Twinkling and watching
    Moon Glow
    makes
    Dew Glow
    Bright silver blanket
    Twilight faeries
    Twirl and dance
    Mysterious One
    Brings mysterious trance
    Moon is waning
    Light and Shadow
    Mind is fading
    Awareness grows
    Leaving this realm
    To another dimension
    Consciousness gains
    Another ascension
    Goodnight and Goodmorning
    Are One

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    Cindy80 commented on Twilight Passage

    09-29-2009

    you have wrote a very beauitful piece of work here... keep doing what you are doing... I wish you good luck
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    kmooney commented on Twilight Passage

    09-17-2009

    Again, I am impressed. You have to read through my works. We do seem to have similar styles to a certain extent. Great word choice and syntax. You have a gift my friend. The first 20 poems I have on this site I wrote when I was in my 20's, some 30 years ago. They are mostly short, abstract pieces. You should look through them. In particular look at Wish I Did, Hear the People and Please Listen. Great write once again.... Kevin
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    danmartyjake1 commented on Twilight Passage

    09-06-2009

    I like your word choices...there's lots of great imagery here...
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    ginga commented on Twilight Passage

    07-20-2009

    This poem enhances ones psyche for sure. It is a very cerebral take on that time of night you speak of. These lines are mesmerizing..."moon glow", "dew glow," twilight faeries twirl and dance," and "Goodnight and good morning are one." 10 Ginga
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    trocka7

    07/21/2009

    Thank you, Ginga for your comments on this...this is one of my favorites as far as the ones I've written go...I wrote it during this time of night/morning, so the essence was captured I think because I wrote it in that state of consciousness...thank you for your feedback :)

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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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