Wisdom of Creation

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    Poem Commentary

    The Spirit of Nature has much to impart if only we will listen.

    Wisdom of Creation

    I asked the Tree
    To show me patience,
    Flexibility and grace

    I asked the Rock
    To show me firmness,
    Steadiness and weight

    I asked the Clouds
    To show me cycles,
    Giving and receiving

    I asked the Sun
    To show me vibrance,
    Radiance and healing

    I asked the Moon
    To show me Mystery,
    Silence and repose

    I asked the Stars
    To show their gifts to me
    When in twilight they arose

    I asked the Sea
    To show me power,
    Balanced ebb and flow

    I asked the Flower
    To show me beauty
    How to bloom and how to grow

    If you ask,
    You shall receive

    Extend the invitation

    Just be open
    To perceive
    The Wisdom of Creation

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    Crush commented on Wisdom of Creation

    10-24-2013

    i love this. it was a nice escape in the middle of my Thursday morning. Beautiful. Thank you.
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    MrGee commented on Wisdom of Creation

    03-10-2013

    Excellent! I have read many poems and this one stands out as one of the best. Having read other works of so-called poems I was often disappointed,however, this work is not want of those. the rhythmn continues throughout and you paint an excellent picture in the mind of this reader. Obviously a 10
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    trocka7

    03/12/2013

    Wow, thanks MrGee! I am humbled by your words and truly appreciate you taking the time to read what I have shared and also to comment. Thanks so much for the great feedback! Feel free to read any of my others, I would love to know what you think :) And most importantly, I would love to know how they make you feel.... thanks again so much for your words!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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