The Privacy of Ink

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    The Privacy of Ink

    In the privacy of my pen, my breath rises and falls,
     absorbing the colors of my everyday way.

    Before tip touches page, in the absence of calls,
     The ink is the muse that persuades me to stay.

    In the privacy of my pen, the ink is my mirror
     Sifting and lifting the truth from the page;

    Bottling the strewn emotions of ecstasy to terror
     In  flasks of perfumed crystal for my hoary age.

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Privacy of Ink

    10-22-2010

    You are a talented and gifted poet. I love the way your thoughts flow easily and beautifully. Excellent job conveying our love affair with words. Well done............E
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    arronpalmer commented on The Privacy of Ink

    10-20-2010

    I adore this. The composition of your lines is exceptional, extended lverse that eventually rhymes in a neat ABAB. Lovely little ode, one to remind you to keep writing, as if we ever needed one. Fantastic.
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    Jammin

    10/20/2010

    Thank you for your critique! :) I really enjoyed writing this one.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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